I am a Year 7 student in the Uru Mānuka Cluster. This is a place where I will share my learning. Please note that some of it will not be complete, it will be my first drafts. Remember to be positive, thoughtful and helpful when you leave me a comment.
Kia ora Basty. Yay. You have started posting more to your blog. I am curious about what learning area this was for. Next time, i your introduction and explanation, give more details and let people know what you were learning and what you had to do.
HI Miss Waho, This was for our Get NZ Writing Month Pack... I'm going to leave it to Basty to explain the poem... he might even include the name of the author who wrote a poem in this way (that we copied). We were meant to fess up to something we had done and got away with... so someone out there really did miss out on that marshmellow!
So, so important to give an introduction/and an explanation about our posts.I also like it when you share how you felt about your work, after completion.A reflection.Stay awesome.
Is this a true story? Dont sneak, just ask. People can be very generous and we all love manners I am sure you would of been allowed it.FYI I wouldn't of stole it from you. I think this was a type of poem or short short story.Introduction/explanation needed.I still liked it.Stay awesome.
Please structure your comments as follows: Positive - Something done well Thoughtful - A sentence to let us know you actually read/watched or listened to what they had to say Helpful - Give some ideas for next time or Ask a question you want to know more about
Kia ora Basty.
ReplyDeleteYay. You have started posting more to your blog. I am curious about what learning area this was for. Next time, i your introduction and explanation, give more details and let people know what you were learning and what you had to do.
HI Miss Waho, This was for our Get NZ Writing Month Pack... I'm going to leave it to Basty to explain the poem... he might even include the name of the author who wrote a poem in this way (that we copied). We were meant to fess up to something we had done and got away with... so someone out there really did miss out on that marshmellow!
DeleteSo, so important to give an introduction/and an explanation about our posts.I also like it when you share how you felt about your work, after completion.A reflection.Stay awesome.
ReplyDeleteIs this a true story? Dont sneak, just ask. People can be very generous and we all love manners I am sure you would of been allowed it.FYI I wouldn't of stole it from you. I think this was a type of poem or short short story.Introduction/explanation needed.I still liked it.Stay awesome.
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