I am a Year 7 student in the Uru Mānuka Cluster. This is a place where I will share my learning. Please note that some of it will not be complete, it will be my first drafts. Remember to be positive, thoughtful and helpful when you leave me a comment.
Kia ora Basty. I am really pleased to see that you are posting learning to your blog. I think it would be good to take a bit more time on making sure that your work is clear, looks good and has some visuals to go with your information. What learning area was this from?
Hi Basty good effort. Things I noticed you might like to edit/correct. 2nd slide- it should be -the muslims do not eat....also you do not need an and, in there or the..on the...perhaps it could of read something like this.....Muslims fast from..... to .......I am not sure but I think they can eat after sunset.Do you know if this is so.How long is Ramadan?You've got me thinking. Well done.Stay awesome
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Kia ora Basty.
ReplyDeleteI am really pleased to see that you are posting learning to your blog. I think it would be good to take a bit more time on making sure that your work is clear, looks good and has some visuals to go with your information. What learning area was this from?
Hi Basty good effort. Things I noticed you might like to edit/correct. 2nd slide- it should be -the muslims do not eat....also you do not need an and, in there or the..on the...perhaps it could of read something like this.....Muslims fast from..... to .......I am not sure but I think they can eat after sunset.Do you know if this is so.How long is Ramadan?You've got me thinking. Well done.Stay awesome
ReplyDeleteYeah sorry about that I just didn't want people to know that I copied it so I created my own word and thanks for commenting
ReplyDeleteSorry for not much information.
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