I am a Year 7 student in the Uru Mānuka Cluster. This is a place where I will share my learning. Please note that some of it will not be complete, it will be my first drafts. Remember to be positive, thoughtful and helpful when you leave me a comment.
Thanks for sharing you mind map with us Basty. Sometimes its hard to keep everything clean and tidy all the time. How clean and tidy is your room this week?
Kia ora Basty. Well done for creating the map using MindMup. It is quite hard to read your ideas so could you delete the speech part saying about the screenshot and make your map bigger?
Thats a tidy mind map you've got there Basty. Good work.In your description you got a word muddled, you used the word cleaning instead of keeping. You might like to edit that.I agree with Ms. Waho that it could of been bigger also.We love to read your great ideas without squinting.Go big go bold.Stay awesome.
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Thanks for sharing you mind map with us Basty. Sometimes its hard to keep everything clean and tidy all the time. How clean and tidy is your room this week?
ReplyDeleteKia ora Basty.
ReplyDeleteWell done for creating the map using MindMup. It is quite hard to read your ideas so could you delete the speech part saying about the screenshot and make your map bigger?
Thats a tidy mind map you've got there Basty. Good work.In your description you got a word muddled, you used the word cleaning instead of keeping. You might like to edit that.I agree with Ms. Waho that it could of been bigger also.We love to read your great ideas without squinting.Go big go bold.Stay awesome.
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