I am a Year 7 student in the Uru Mānuka Cluster. This is a place where I will share my learning. Please note that some of it will not be complete, it will be my first drafts. Remember to be positive, thoughtful and helpful when you leave me a comment.
Friday, May 31, 2019
Giant Pacific Octopus totally engulfs scuba diver
The scuba diver saw a gigantic octopus. The gigantic octopus is trying to eat the scuba diver. I don’t know why is the octopus is trying to eat the man maybe he’s hungry. This was recorded in day. The octopus was sticking on the guy. The guy name is shanx. The sounds that I would hear is the….. BUBBLES!! Because the sounds of it is blub..blub..blub.. I would feel warm because I am wearing scuba diver.
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Talofa Basty,
ReplyDeleteI liked the way you put an interesting description of what is happening. I also like the picture that you put on the bottom of the writing. You could put a simile of the gigantic octopus (for example the octopus was as big as a whiteboard).