I am a Year 7 student in the Uru Mānuka Cluster. This is a place where I will share my learning. Please note that some of it will not be complete, it will be my first drafts. Remember to be positive, thoughtful and helpful when you leave me a comment.
Today we made a slide about moose it has a lot of facts you can check what the facts are and comment if you want me to add more facts if it's not enough. Bye see ya.
hi basty its me jason i really liked how you told fact to us maybe you could add more facts but it was still great maybe you could do some more animals
Hi Basty, Really nice slide about moose! I never knew to much about moose, Maybe next time you could try change the colour of the text Well some of them It's just a little hard to see, I have a question for you-- Is moose your favorite animal? Anyways that's all for today Bye!
Please structure your comments as follows: Positive - Something done well Thoughtful - A sentence to let us know you actually read/watched or listened to what they had to say Helpful - Give some ideas for next time or Ask a question you want to know more about
hi basty its me jason i really liked how you told fact to us maybe you could add more facts but it was still great maybe you could do some more animals
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ReplyDeleteReally nice slide about moose! I never knew to much about moose, Maybe next time you could try change the colour of the text Well some of them It's just a little hard to see, I have a question for you-- Is moose your favorite animal?
Anyways that's all for today Bye!
nope not mah favourite
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