I am a Year 7 student in the Uru Mānuka Cluster. This is a place where I will share my learning. Please note that some of it will not be complete, it will be my first drafts. Remember to be positive, thoughtful and helpful when you leave me a comment.
I can tell from your comment that you really enjoy Kiwican, I do to.Remember to use full stops and capital letters you did pretty good job, maybe re-read it and see if there are any words needed that might give your writing more flow.Your doing great Basty, keep it up.
Please structure your comments as follows: Positive - Something done well Thoughtful - A sentence to let us know you actually read/watched or listened to what they had to say Helpful - Give some ideas for next time or Ask a question you want to know more about
I can tell from your comment that you really enjoy Kiwican, I do to.Remember to use full stops and capital letters you did pretty good job, maybe re-read it and see if there are any words needed that might give your writing more flow.Your doing great Basty, keep it up.
ReplyDeleteI missed a little word out in my comment can you figure it out.It would give my comment flow.That kind of a thing.
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