Tuesday, November 27, 2018
BOOK FOR CURIOUS KIWI
HELLO CURIOUS KIWI,i have a book and the title is treasure island.they finding golds and they see the volcano.let's see what's the story.
the long time ago there was a rat kid and he's working from the beer shop and his kindly boss giving him some one small bag of golds.the rat kid wants to go in treasure island to see where did they get the golds.the rat kid went to the captain flints.can i go in treasure island.said the little kid.captain flints said no.the little kid sad.the kid have a plan he hide in the barrel.when the ship going he see the sea.when he see it he fall down captain flints guard check who is in the barrel.bye
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Hey Basty,
ReplyDeleteIt is great to read what books you are interested in. Treasure hunts are one of my favourite stories to read. When I was younger my mum used to organise treasure hunts for my birthday parties - it was pretty cool. When you are writing you need to make sure that you are using a capital letter after every full stop - this will make it more clear for the reader. If you had to rate this book out of ten what would you give it?
Hello Basty it's Ethan H from Gilberthorpe school
ReplyDeleteyour story about treasure Island sounds awesome I read the book as well and I quite liked it.Did you like it because you sounded interested about the book. I have a question what was your favourite bit of the book and why was it your favourite bit? I also like the front cover it looks quite interesting! Maybe next time you could reread your writing for it to make more sense but that's alright because next time you could do that.But that's about it what I need to say so bye!